Chelsee's Attempt-American Idol Sisters

After so much mucking around with three total different movies i think i have found the keeper. This is just my first attempt at this so any ideas to add or criticism is much appreciated. The movie im basing it on is Sister Act 2 a classic childhood favorite of mine but the twist of adding american idol into it with the judges simon cowles, paula and randy being the nuns and rita is auditioning for the solo part for the all state competition her class is enetering. She thinks shes a real good singer because her parents are Chris Brown and Rhianna. They can sing but she can't. She doesnt get the part, but then Brother Paul (paula) believes in her and gives her after school lessons and when it gets close to the comp, the main singer gets hit by a bus or gets larynx cancer and can't sing so she puts her name forward to sing but everybody heard her the first time she can't sing blah blah, but then she starts singing and its absolutely phenominal! Hope you's have seen sister act 2 i love it. great voices but more to the point this is my attempt:

Cough cough "uh uh" cough cough! Furiously trying to clear her throat. Her eyes start to close and her hand bent out in a weird kungfu action rises to her face, out of her slightly pinched lips still clasped together a quiet mouse humming voice struggles to put a note together from her choir script held infront of her.



"W-w-whyyyyy sh-sh-should I(eieie) feel discooooouraged, w-w-whyyyyy should the shaaaadoooow come (screech)"



"Rita, ahh that was definitley insightful of what little vocal talents you have, I encourage you to come see me after class, i can enroll you into home-tech class try not to burn the toast how you burnt my ears" snarkingly commented Sister Simone.

Sister Simone is the Head Nun for music class TOTAL BITCH! Then theres sister brandy and Brother Paul who help out and time to time bring Simone a mocha with 2 chocolate fish and crust cut toast with lite meadowlea margerine and squeeze of lemon juice in the mornings to hopefully give everybody a relief of happiness for the first part of the day.

"Come on, im not that bad!"
"My passion is singing, everybody says im good at it"
"You don't know real talent if it came and kicked you in the face" Rita protested.

Roar of laughter filled the room, she started laughing too on the outside but on the inside she was totally shattered, what was wrong with her singing? she felt she had sang her best? Thoughts flooded her mind. Warren proceeded towards the microphone

Chelz

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