Your ideas on my ideas

Hi there. I have chosen to use Heavenly Creatures as my movie for fanfic. I have two possible ideas for endings. Would you mind giving me some feedback? By the way if you haven't seen the film I have posted some links to a couple of websites. But just to quickly inform you the movie follows two teenage girls (Pauline and Juliet) who form a very close relationship. Both become lost in their own world of fantasy and eventually lose touch of reality. The mother of Pauline (Honora) becomes concerned about the intensity of the relationship and attempts to separate them. The girls conjure up a plan to remove Honora from their lives so as they can remain together. The film ends with the murder of Honora (a brutal beating in the Christchurch Gardens) and closes with some text stating that the girls were arrested a couple of days later and sent to separate prisons.

Idea 1
· A suicide pact instead of the murder of Honora Rieper. Juliet and Pauline become so depressed that they make a suicide pact as they believe they can no longer go on living without each other. A carefully planned event that will devastate both families immensely. Disturbing insight into the minds of both girls as they make the final decision to take their own lives.

Idea 2
· Someone comes along during the brutal beating of Honora and the girls suddenly realise the extent of their actions. They now have to live with the consequences of their actions as they go through the trials. Will Honora survive after someone interrupts the murder or will the damage have already been done? What will be the outcomes of such a horrific and cruel act when interrupted by a passer-by?

Thanks, Natalie